first draft of score

supercollider/remembering_clive_wearing_synthdef.scd

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ SynthDef(\flicker, { |automate = 1, bufs = #[0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8],
 	// end times / fade outs (must be same length as fadeInTimes with fadeInTimes[i] < fadeOutTimes[i])
 	var fadeOutTimes = [47, 106] * 60;
 	// These are the times to wake up with a flourish of activity and the reading of an entry in the journal
-	var wakeTimes = [4, 9, 17, 24, 34, 44, 53, 57, 73, 97, 101, 106] * 60;
+	var wakeTimes = [4, 9, 17, 24, 34, 44, 53, 57, 73, 97, 101] * 60;
 	// These are the frequency ratios of the ensemble parts
 	var freqRatios = [2, 3/2, 5/4, 7/4, 11/8, 13/8, 17/16, 19/16, 23/16];
 	// Triggers
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ SynthDef(\flicker, { |automate = 1, bufs = #[0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8],
 	// Triggers for wakeTimes
 	wakeUpTrigs = Select.kr(automate, [InTrig.kr(wakeTrigBusNum), timedTrigger.value(wakeTimes)]);
 
-	//~~~~~ Rich-get-richer Algorithm ~~~~~
+	//~~~~~ Rich-Get-Richer Algorithm ~~~~~
 	// Update resolution
 	pulse = Impulse.kr(30);
 	// State of consciousness: asleep or awake; a wake up lasts 60 seconds plus a bit of a tail
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ SynthDef(\flicker, { |automate = 1, bufs = #[0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8],
 	// Feedback binary representation
 	LocalOut.kr({|i| (i <= selects) * (selects <= i) } ! 9);
 
-	//~~~~~ Control signals ~~~~~
+	//~~~~~ Control Signals ~~~~~
 	// The norms are basically the amount of energy to each element
 	energy = norms;
 	// In a toy model manner, this mimics voltage to the system
@@ -87,10 +87,10 @@ SynthDef(\flicker, { |automate = 1, bufs = #[0, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8],
 	// Final mix currently set to output stereo where the multiplier is the final output level
 	// Send to separate channel for more control of the indivuals sounds (e.g. with a mixer)
 	// The lamentations of a 50 / 50 chance of sounding at all
-	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(lamentations) * fadeInOutEnv * wakeEnv * 0.75 * TIRand.kr(0, 1, wakeUpTrigs));
+	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(lamentations) * fadeInOutEnv * wakeEnv * 0.8 * TIRand.kr(0, 1, wakeUpTrigs));
 	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(hums) * fadeInOutEnv * wakeEnv * 0.075);
-	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(ensemble) * fadeInOutEnv * wakeEnv * 0.125);
-	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(drone) * fadeInOutEnv * 0.25);
+	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(ensemble) * fadeInOutEnv * wakeEnv * 0.12);
+	Out.ar([0,1], Mix.new(drone) * fadeInOutEnv * 0.2);
 
 	//~~~~~ Visualization Control ~~~~~
 	// Send signals to visualizer (these could be sent and scaled appropriated to control real lights)

supercollider/remembering_clive_wearing_visuals.scd

@@ -43,7 +43,8 @@ projectionWin.drawFunc = {
 			Pen.addOval(innerSquare);
 			Pen.fillRadialGradient(innerSquare.center, innerSquare.center,
 				(innerSquare.width / 16), (innerSquare.width / 2),
-				Color.black.blend(Color.new255(255, 214, 170, 255), pow(blend[(i * 9) + j], 0.5)), Color.black);
+				Color.black.blend(Color.new255(255, 214, 170, 255), pow(blend[(i * 9) + j], 0.5)),
+				Color.black);
 	} ! 9 } ! 2
 };
 projectionWin.refresh;